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Thursday, 26 April 2012

68 Delicious Food

Delicious, mouth watering food!
Write a sentence to describe one of these meals! Use similes, metaphors, personification, adjectives and good phrases to describe!
Best sentences will recive a small prize!



68 comments:

  1. mmmmmmmmmmmmm meltinmg chesse drooling in my mouth i want some

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    1. what is the prize??

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    2. the tantilising cupcake teases your taste buds while the choclate aroma is scintilating

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  2. As you take your first bite out of this soft creamy cake with a crunchy topping you will fell like your in haven.

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    1. Well done! First person to comment! Need more!

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  3. Hot jalapeno peppers tingling your taste buds!

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  4. The mouth watering burger will taste out of this world, as the first bite is taken you will feel as light as a feather. Your taste buds will tingle and burst with excitement. The buger is as tasty as anything you can and will eat. But theres one thing about this meal it will make you jump it will also send a sneaky message into your mind saying eat me, devourer me to bits.

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    1. Brilliant work Courtney! Please dont publish full name (because of safety reasons).

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  5. As you that a heavnly bite out of this scromchious buger you will feel like your in heavn.The buger shouts at you telling you to take a mouth
    watring colassal bite out of it. But garding it is lovely golden chip acting like gates for buckingnum palace.When you see this dightful buger your taste bud celabrate.As the smell invadeds your nostrills your spine start to tingling.The kepchup look like the sea in the middle of a storm. Scatter arond the bun is seeds as pale as the belly of a dophin.

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    1. Callum some impressive sentences! To be the winner you must correct your spellings!

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  6. the delightful chocolate icing whirls around the delicious cake making your taste buds tingle. As you take a chunk out of this special treat your mouth will have the desire to eat more and more. the colourful icing makes your mouth water. What are you waiting for? go and have some more!

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  7. A once in a lifetime delight, a chocolate cake originated from heaven, just makes you dribble and drool once placed on a clean/plate tissue in front of you.

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    1. Which Aiysha is this? Good sentence! Well done! I would need more to make you the winner so far!

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    2. It's Aiysha D

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  8. Mmmm... so mouthwatering, so lavish it teases my taste buds. My tongue has to wrestle with sweetness from heaven. This flourishing pizza can take on the most supreme and lip suckling meals on the entire planet, it can have any delicious topping like sizzling pepperoni.

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    1. are you that hungry andi

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  9. mmmmmmmmmmm it looks so delicious

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  10. the scintilating muffin looks so amazing. topped with crimson sprinkles.

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  11. the mouth watering sponge enters your mouth and slides down your mouth urging you to take another bite

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  12. Sweets smarties scattered over the heavenly chcolate. As soon as you cascade this delicous treat down your throat, your tastebuds will be asking for more. Crumbly side enterng your mouth and the place you will be in will be no other than heaven! swirls all around on this devine cake!

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  13. The succulent smarites exploding in my mouth. The fresh cream cascades that my throat will be a moment to savour. It's like a volcano errupting in my mouth. It feels like two people doing the tango on my tastebuds

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  14. Mmmmmmmmmmmm.......... delicous flakes smuthered on top of this delicous creamy cupcake. One bite out of it and you'll end up in heaven. It's so monumental just like the five wonders of the world [Eiffell tower Pyramids of the giza and DONT FORGET THE Taj mahl]. That scintalating luxurious smell invading your nostrils. This cupcake will tingle and make your taste buds out of control Have me on any special occation.
    Just eat me and share with your friends.

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  15. Mmmmmmmm......... The minute I took a devouring bite of the dressed up creamy cupcake I thought I was in an immaculate heaven. How did this happen? My taste buds were tingling like swings. The luxurious smell wafts through your nostrils. The delightful chocolaty cupcake sitting in front of my big bulgy eyes. When it melted in my mouth it cascaded down in my throat like a chocolaty waterfall. If you eat one you want to go and have more, well go on then.

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  16. This mouth watering chocolaty cupcake will make your taste bud go to heaven


    MMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  17. It makes me want so much cake

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  18. Aleena the online girl20 September 2012 at 18:18

    Mr Ahmed what is the prize?And were is the prize?by the way I have been online today for 3 and a half hours

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  19. THIS FOOD IS SO MUCH NICE!IT'S NOT FAIR!

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  20. Tongue loves it(food). Tummy,"no more!" Tongue says shh. Tummy is sick and lets it out. Tongue goes," Yuck".No one eats a thing.

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  21. Meals are the food for the body
    Knowledge is the food for the mind
    Meditation is the food for the spirit
    Music is the food for the love of heart
    Dreams are the food for the consciousness
    Prayer is the food for the Almighty
    Love is the food for the living heart
    Thoughts are the food for the brain
    Colourful ink is the food for the pen
    Ideas are the food for the stories
    Truth is the food for the will
    Sun’s energy is the food for the plants
    Plants are the food for the living beings
    But one man’s food is another man’s poison!

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  22. The mouth-melting,smooth,chocolatey cream melts rapidly in my mouth as I crazily crave to have even more.FEELING AS IF IN HEAVEN, THE SOFT, SPONGY CAKE GOES DOWN MY THROAT ALONG WITH THE MULTICOLOURED SMARTIES.URGING MY MUM TO GIVE ME MORE, I THINK BACK TO HOW IT LOOKED LIKE IN THE PLATTER.A LITTLE,CHOCOLATE CUPCAKE IN A PLATE WITH THE MOST SWEET CREAM EVER TASTED.I LOOK ABOVE THE CAKE AND SEE THE MOST WONDERFUL TOPPINGS OF SMARTIES WITH THE MOST MAGNIFICENT CANDLE LIT.

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  23. Everyday as i look back at the mouthwatering,appetizing,chocolatey cupcake i crave to have the chcolate melting in my mouth like the layers of heaven one day with the sprinkles on top like tiny pieces of gold!

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  24. Heavenly soft, the scrumptios, delicios cake sat in the corner of the room as I stood, my mouth watering, staring at it in pure amazement.

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  25. Delightful and scrumptious, the mouth watering cake sat in the middle of the table, as I stood and stared at it in amazement. It had layers of Heaven beneath the thick and soft sponge above. Whilst I came towards it, I had already smelt the wonderful aroma. When the delicious cake stopped melting in my mouth, it floated down my throat like a supreme chocolate river!

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  26. I eagerly devoured the spicy, mouthwatering jalapeno pizza, my nerves tingling with spice and anticipation of the next slice; I just new that I had to have more. Drooling heavily,I reached out with my larger than life hands for another slice as I remembered my mother's words which I had taken no notice of-‘you are killing yourself with your diet,stop it, please.’
    sorry for the one before i forgot to add my name

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  27. As the boy eat messily , I watched him in despair, staring at the melted cheese dribble down his mouth. Reluctantly, I walked away, holding my belly together. Suddenley the boy jumped out of his seat and seemed to be following me! Soon, I could stand it no longer. I quickly asked him if I could have some. He stared at me like I was crazy and then ran off. However, as he was running, he dropped a slice of pizza and I knew it was crazy but the waft seemed to convince me to pick it up. I knew it was absolutley vile, but I was willing to be disgusting,just for this occasion anyway!!

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  28. Soft dough made from high grade flour, top with a festival of mozzarella, Parmesan and cheddar cheese, melted to perfection.Each bite would absolutely crave you for that satisfying taste. The peppers diced with the sharpest knives and the cheese gently dancing amongst your taste buds.

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  29. Mr Ahmed when I type the page keeps refreshing so I am just going to write it down.

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  30. As I wait for the tempting, tender, succulent layers of heaven, I glance at it's heavenly, mouthwatering, appetizing frosting. It was love at fist bite.

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  31. As the luxorious creamy cake lays in the center of the table as if it was untouchable, you can literally feel your tastebuds craving for an incredible slice of heavenly goodness. You can see the minature sprinkles of gold perfectly sitting amongst the top of the smooth chocolate until you cannot resist anymore and dash for to munch it and hoping no one catches you.

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  32. The mouth watering plate of heaven stood beside me as the juicy source came cascading out like a river

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  33. My mouth started watering as I looked at the the chocolated covered,sugar filled cupcke. It sat on the corner of my. I couldn't bare another moment as it taunted me into eating it.

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  34. As you bite into the soft cheesy pizza, your taste buds go to heaven.

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  35. The frosty, creamy, mouth-watering chocholate trickled down my throat making me crave for more. The world whirled around me and all I could think of was the heavenly chocolate flavour in my mouth.

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  36. The luscious chocolate cake melts in your mesmorised mouth as you hurry to get more.

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  37. As the mouthwatering,jaw dropping pizza took the first touched on my taste buds it started to dance joyfully whilst the the chunky cheese sat peacefully on my tongue,also my mind rapidly went to heaven

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  38. KAJAANI-YOUR FAVOURITE8 October 2012 at 17:33

    MR AHHHHMEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE PAGE KEEPS REFRESHING AND I DON'T KNOW HOW!!!! TOMORROW ILL JUST WRITE AND COME

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    1. Actually, Amber is Mr Ahmed's favourite.

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    2. Why don't you just ask Mr Ahmed who's his favourite?

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  39. My eye caught a glimpse, rapidly of the piece of mouthwatering heaven. I was demanded not eat it but it lured me towards it as I was going to have my first bite I knew that it would be luscious and it was. my life had changed completly...

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  40. ZAIRA!!!!!!!!!!!!!8 October 2012 at 19:50

    As few minutes passed by, i took a sudden glimpse of the most amazing most mouthwatering jaw dropping most fabulous piece of pizza , just then once i was taking a immense bite of the mesmerizing pizza my taste buds tingled !

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  41. Chocolate sponge rolls in your mouth while the cream rushes in the taste buds

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  42. Soft dough made from high grade flour, topped with a festival of mozzarella, parmesean and cheddar cheese. Each bite would absolutely crave you for that satisfying taste.

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  43. The moist chocolate cake melts in my mouth, sticky with fudge frosting sitting on my tongue. The bitter and simultaneously sweet smell of it puts me in a serene mind state. I smack my lips ( which are covered with melted chocolate) together. With the rich deep shades of brown on every delicious layer this cake acts as a slice of happiness on a white styrofoam plate.

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  44. I’ve eaten a lot of cupcakes, but this one was special. The cake that was bursting beautifully out of the soggy cup was rich dark chocolate. It was moist and pulled apart easily, but didn’t crumble. It was sweet, but not too sweet. The wieght of the dense, yet fluffy, cake was to much for the paper cup to hold and the petite cake was leaning dramatically to one side. The pink icing was swirled on thick and delicatly, topped with an over-sized Valentines Day heart candy. It was speckled with dark red fragments of fresh raspberry giving it an ornate finish. The glutinous cake and the lardacious frosting combined divinely in my mouth creating a taste sensation the likes of which a person seldom experiences in life.

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  45. I’ve eaten a lot of cupcakes, but this one was special. The cake that was bursting beautifully out of the soggy cup was rich dark chocolate. It was moist and pulled apart easily, but didn’t crumble. It was sweet, but not too sweet. The wieght of the dense, yet fluffy, cake was to much for the paper cup to hold and the petite cake was leaning dramatically to one side. The pink icing was swirled on thick and delicatly, topped with an over-sized Valentines Day heart candy. It was speckled with dark red fragments of fresh raspberry giving it an ornate finish. The glutinous cake and the lardacious frosting combined divinely in my mouth creating a taste sensation the likes of which a person seldom experiences in life.

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  46. Mr Ahmed, what is the prize???

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  47. Food food absolutely appetising
    Food food absolutely tantalising
    The way it makes your stomach jump at its mention
    The way it melts on your tongue when you go to taste it
    The way the mouth waters at its mention or sighting
    The uncontrollable breathing for some impatient people
    As the food is prepared the intensity of its appeal
    The race to the table to secure a seat at the buffet
    The enjoyment as the food passes down the throat
    With a nice cold drink to was it down with
    How quickly everyone disappears at the sight of empty dirty dishes
    Food food absolutely appetising
    Food food absolutely tantalising

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    1. Mr Ahmed you know that poem that starts with food food absolutely appetising, well i didn't write that!!! someone used my name!!!

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  48. OK Mr Ahmed carm down we don't what to get get fat!!! But enyway nice food i like pakistian food like kebabishorigina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. Yummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! Who can take this? my tummy is growling to eat this food like a lion.Na, i already ate this.

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  49. As I devoured the chocolate I felt a tingeling feeling, it was almost as if my taste buds were dancing and prancing among the stage (my mouth). I carefully bit into the carnival of dark chocolate which slowly melted on my starving toungue. It felt wonderful.

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  50. As i picked up the metal spoon,the velvety taste of chocolate made me want to grab all the divine,crispy cake and wanted to eat more and more.Once i took a bite my mouth shrunken and my lips burnt as if the delicious,mouth watering cake stung me. Mmmm..the divine taste of the scrumptious chocolaty cake made by taste buds fly up to heaven.The rich and the mouth tingling cake was formed as a smooth circle.The fires and flames inside the icing crawls out a lumpy piece of chocolate syrup making my heart as chocolaty as you could ever imagine............

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  51. Do i have the prize?

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  52. When the glittery,sheen cake sparkled a light threw my eyes,the velvety and delicious look of the cake crawls out a lovely piece of chocolate devouring everything that was left.

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  53. Yummy!
    I wish i could eat the food or even have better food!My Favorite food is the fairy cake.the thing that makes it look like the best is the chocolate icing and the sparkles with the toppings.But why would the fairy cake have a candle?Its not a birth day cake.And its dangerous and if it were a birth day cake, it would be for some one who is going to be or because some one who would became 5 years old or more, they would have no space.I don't think the pizza is mouth watering.It would only be when there is a foot ball match or a movie.I like the burger but,why would a burger have doughnuts on top[ of it?I would rather eat the burger if it had no doughnuts. But still I would because I love doughnuts.So I would eat the burger.Or is it chicken.I like chicken.So i would still eat it.

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