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Wednesday 26 February 2014

2 A Short Story


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Bang! His heart was pounding, pounding and pounding. Tears were cascading like an Amazon rainfall. Anger growling, growling and growling. Suddenly, he found a trail of footsteps. Desperately, he follows the footsteps. As he came to the end, there he realises that he entered, the rat bat gang territory. In a shock, he was about to run but remembered his sole-companion best-cat. Shane, who is terror stricken, follows the dark tunnel that enters the rat band gangs territory. Immediately, he found the abonded cage with kitty- cat. In a flash, without any fear, he runs and takes his cat. As he took the car, the gang takes their guns, and shot like an Amercian clown show. In a chance, the boy called shane, didn’t die. Shaneran, like Usain Bolt, running the Olympic race. In the run, Shane had a shorth cut to his house where they don’t know, but it was risky as he could get caught so he took anther path...                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               BY : SINTHURAM

2 comments:

  1. Good work it is good because you described the feeling of the character

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