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Wednesday 26 February 2014

0 The Great Chase



Scene 5: The Great Chase


(A group of adolescent members were loitering around the abandoned alleyway with spray cans. They were blessing the walls with their gangs signatures.)


Gang Member 1: (assertively instructs gang member 2 to hurry up incase they get caught) HURRY UP! We can’t afford to get caught again. Remember what happened yesterday?! It took us ages before we could escape for freedom!


Gang Member 2: (shaking the spray can to get the left over paint out) Alright, calm down, I’m trying to get the stupid paint to work!


(All of a sudden Shane stumbles across the gang members. The gang and Shane’s eyes meet across the alleyway. Both parties’ eyes are fixated upon each other).


Shane: (stroking whiskets trying his upmost to shield the cat from the gang’s attention) Come on cateyes let’s run before they pursue us.


Gang member 1: (angrily) Oi! That’s that boy. He’s the one who’s meant to rob that shop for us but when he did he kept all the money to himself. AAAAAG!! (Beating hands on their chest)


Gang Member 2: (without a moment to think) let’s go you fools and grab him before he tries to escape from us!


(The gang members give chase to Shane, they run along the bustling streets of New York coming across near death experiences such as cars grindings to a holt, drivers hurling abuse at Shane).


Shane: (out of breath and breathing really heavily)


It’s okay, spitfire, no need to worry, I think we lost those two rascals. (Relieved)


Gang member 3: (anxiously) where did that stupid boy go?!!


Gang member 2: (quarrelling) it’s all your fault we lost him!


Gang member 3: what the….what do you mean because of me!


Gang member 2: welly you wouldn’t stop drinking now would you, otherwise you wouldn’t be so exhausted by now!


Gang member 3: as if you never, IDIOT!


Gang member 1: (Evily) come on now boys, get over it, its not like if we never catch him then death will arrive, we still have a new day to come…


Gang member 2 3: yeh! (Nasty laugh and smile)

























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